November Notes, Day 5, Song: Criminal by Fiona Apple
Criminal Miscue
Hot, dirty sex in the back of the car
with a man she attracted in a bar
betraying the one who loves her
devising excuses, he’ll discover.
Too often she needs someone new.
Warring with herself: criminal miscue.
end 11/5/2016
S. Darlington
I love the sultry tone of this and the way you have shaped the poem.
thank you, James! I appreciate your reading! 🙂
not a good situation to be in. well-written piece!