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Voila! Not serious! 🙂 . . . that’s for me doing so much really serious stuff at times. heh.
Goin’ Campin’
She blinked. A tent, a grill, and something nondescript on wheels. His idea of a perfect getaway.
She smiled. She could handle this.
“You weren’t kidding when you said camping.”
“I love camping,” he said.
“Where do we sleep?”
“In the tent in the sleeping bag.”
“You do know bags were invented for shopping, not sleeping?”
“Dollface, you’ll find all the goods you need to shop for with me …in the bag.”
“Just a charmer all the way, aren’t you, Steve?”
“You’ll love it.”
“Up until the first scorpion.”
“No scorpions. Maybe a rattler, but you’d hear him first.”
end 12/2/2016
S. Darlington
Yoiks! I’d pull up the stakes, get in the car and go home to my comfy bed.
lol
Dear Sascha,
The snake is in the bag, all right. And rattling on. Good tale, tight and to the point.
Yours,
Doug
Thanks, Doug! Thank you for reading! 🙂
I’m just not convinced they’ve got a future together. In fact I’m not convinced he’s got a future with anyone. Nicely done.
lol Thank you for reading! 🙂
Haha. So funny. Many guys I know are like this and their girlfriends/wives as well. It seems women either love camping or they hate it. I have a feeling she’s not going to want to come back. Great piece Sascha 🙂
Thanks, Mandi. You’re so right. A lot of the women I know like their camping to involve a warm bed in a hotel. 🙂
Amen 🙂
A rattler instead of a scorpion, that’s a relief–not. LOL. A charming, fun story, but he’d have lost me with the dollface already. And I love camping.
lol! Thank you for reading! 🙂
Dear Sascha,
I don’t think he’s helping much here. Fun diaologue but, rattlers? No thanks.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you, Rochelle!
This is so much fun! 😁