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I Choose You
After walking Judy suggests stopping at the tearoom overlooking the river. I order a slice of coconut cake. An orange cat winds itself around my legs, purring, while a black and white one crawls onto my lap.
Edward grins. “Even here you pick up strays.”
“Oh, they’re not strays,” say the proprietor, placing the teapots on the table. “They’re pests. My husband’s pests.”
Edward’s sister, Judy, and her partner, Stanley, sit opposite us. Judy eyes my cake.
“That looks nice,” Judy says. “You Americans and your sweets.”
On her plate is half of a scone; on Stanley’s is the other half. I glance at Edward, my lips still hugging the fork, adoring the delicious cake. He’s oblivious to the constant undercurrent.
I take one more tiny bite and then set the plate on the table.
Judy raises a thin eyebrow. “You’re not going to finish that? You lot always waste food. When I was young, we were lucky to even see cake. Isn’t that right, Edward?”
A boat motors by its throb like the cat’s purr. Edward pats the orange cat on the head, squeezes my fingers, and then taps my wedding ring, silently reminding me: “I choose you.”
end 2/1/2017
S. Darlington
Loved this so much! Thank you for sharing.
Thank you so much for reading! 🙂
You are so welcome. I love your work. Your wonderful.
I thought the subtext was well handled – the sibling disapproval was clear.
Thank you. I really appreciate your input! I find it a very hard line between subtlety and throwing a glass of water in the reader’s face. I’m still learning. 🙂
Nice tale of contrast. Well done.
Thank you! I appreciate your reading! 🙂
I like that. Love over family. Becomes sometimes family sucks.
lol you’re telling me! ha. Thank you, as always, for reading! 🙂
You’re welcome Sascha 🙂