The Dare

I’m early this week! Yippee! Thank you as always to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers!

Since “paranormal” seems to be winning in my NaNoWriMo poll (see here), I thought I’d better start practicing.


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The Dare

Me afraid? Just because it’s Halloween, pitch-black, and the wind slides leaves like skeletal feet on concrete, and I’m alone in the haunted castle? Noooooo.

Somehow, I drift to sleep.

An icy grip awakens me. The pale boy frowns. “I have to leave you now. But they will come. They came for me.”

He disappears. He looked familiar, like the little neighborhood boy who died here one Halloween during a dare. Scared to death, some say.

I’m done. They can call me a coward.

My palm cups the door handle as the bolt snaps into place by unseen fingers.



Sascha Darlington



40 replies »

  1. I don’t even like paranormal, but I got chills at the end. It takes a really good writer to draw me into a paranormal story, like a Stephen King. I read somewhere, perhaps plastered on your blog, that you write like Stephen King. Well done.

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