NaPoWriMo Day 2, Evicted

The always interesting thing about reading poetry is where your mind takes you after reading the final word. If I based a poem on that poem I find that frequently my poem won’t bear much of a resemblance to the original poem.

For today’s poem, the inspiration came from Mary Oliver’s Death at a Great Distance. I thought of the mushroom and the snake, the latter causes so much fear that people go out of their way to kill them. And, of course, these days, we just keep building the green spaces essentially taking away natural habitats.




Saws sounding like angry hornets
break the wren’s serenade.
Bit by bit oaks, maples, dogwoods
fall, a thud, a chunk of earth
dislodged. More machines materialize
thundering over the patch,
churning dirt, until green gives way.
The thatch of woods, a memory now
where once the fox kits chased tails
before sunrise.

3 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo Day 2, Evicted

  1. i adore Mary Oliver’s poem , the ones that I have read. I don’t know very much about her poetry so am pleased you are using her as inspiration, it is beautiful Sascha.

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