Thank you, Lisa for this wonderful prompt at dVerse. It’s been a long time since I’ve done prosery; what fun!
Sharpening Knives and Wits
When Daddy’s boat didn’t return, Mama took to bed, only getting up to use the toilet or check if Daddy’s pickup was in the rutted drive. That day Mama and me changed places.
I started harvesting oysters, taking them to the market, or using Daddy’s waterfront stall, where I’d shuck oysters for tourists amused by a girl doing what men did.
The men didn’t take it well. They threatened me, but when it’s between an angry redneck man and mama and me living, I chose living. I learned in those days you couldn’t trust men, even ones you’d known your entire life, even ones your Daddy thought were salt-of-the-earth.
No I do not weep at the world. I am too busy sharpening my oyster knife as well as my wits and pen. You can teach old dogs new tricks, but not so old men.
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Oh how I love your story. So much said about human nature in it. So glad the line inspired you to join in, Sascha.
In the past few years, I’ve had my eyes opened to how people really behave and I’m always hoping to convey that. Many thanks, Lisa. 🙂
You’re very welcome, my friend.
Indeed it says a lot about human nature and even stereotypes. It’s sad that grown men could do this to a girl, but living is a must. The world goes on and so does life, and we do what we must to survive. Very well written and concise! Love that final line about old dogs and old men, hahaha.
A few years ago I would never have written about this behavior because I didn’t see it. My blinders are falling off. Thanks so much, Lucy! 🙂
A great story! I love the setting and the strength that comes through!
Many thanks, Dwight! 🙂 I think she is strong because of a good role model and then necessity.
Yes, that is often the way it works. You are welcome!
Great! I like the character you have created here. She sounds like a survivor!
I think she is. Thanks so much, Ingrid!
Incredible, Sascha. This was incredible.
<3
David
Thank you so much, David! 🙂
Love the personal perspective in this …. beautifully penned.
Thank you so much, Helen! I appreciate your comment.
Taking over from Daddy ….
Yes! Thanks so much, Reena.
Oh Sascha! This was brilliant! Love it!
I’d glad. Thank you so much, Dale! 🙂